The Vast Empire's Communications Network
  A mysterious soldier/continued

Post New Topic  
profile | register | preferences | faq | search

UBBFriend: Email This Page to Someone! next newest topic | next oldest topic
Author Topic:   A mysterious soldier/continued

Posts: 18
Registered: Aug 2001

posted September 05, 2001 05:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for VEA_Sidiuos   Click Here to Email VEA_Sidiuos        Reply w/Quote
Ok, this is a continuation from my story, from yesterday. Plz reply and tell me wot u think ...and by all mans add to it. Yeah Argon...that reply is ok...It gave me sum ideas too. we go.

The young man was carried to med room and placed into the gloewing red bacta tank that stood by the end of the bed. At that same time, an officer enterd the room, holding some fresh cloths. He placed them on the bed and then hastily exited. In the corner of the room was a 2-IB medical droid, which walked over to the tank of red liquidand removed the man from it. he droid then placed the stranger onto the bedd and checked his opps. The droid then hooked the man up to the IRV unit and allowed him to rest. Suddenly, the door of the med room wooshed open, and the four men that carried him in earler enterd the room.
"How is he doing?" asked one of the officers?" The droid turned around an replied. "Good. He should be waking up soon."
he officer nodded his head in aknowladgement. Just then, the strangers' eyes began to flutter open. A loud moan filld the room. The stranger then sat up in his bed and looked around the room. "Were...where am I ?" rasped the man.
An officer stepped forward and introduced him self. "My name is Argon. You are in the VE headquarters. What is your name?" The stranger looked at Argon with his cold, steel like eyes. "My Sidious...."


COL Argon Viper

Posts: 230
Registered: Feb 2001

posted September 05, 2001 05:55 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for COL Argon Viper   Click Here to Email COL Argon Viper        Reply w/Quote
Hey Sidious, it'll be easier if you just reply to the original topic. That way, people can catch up on the story a lot easier and we don't flood the storynet with threads. Just transfer this one to the original topic(just use copy/paste). To post a reply, use the "Post Reply" button at the bottom of the screen Otherwise, this looks like it's gonna be pretty good



All times are ET (US)

next newest topic | next oldest topic

Administrative Options: Close Topic | Archive/Move | Delete Topic
Post New Topic  
Hop to:

Contact Us |

Ultimate Bulletin Board 5.45c