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Anakin Citizen Posts: 241
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posted June 16, 2001 02:57 AM
�Have a seat gentlemen we are about to start,� Anakin said as he threw data cards at each troop. �In this mission, a great friend of mine will be our main target. He is a Moff that once served the Glorious Old Empire before it was destroyed. He has been taken prisoner by troops of the New Imperium, and must be freed for if his life is taken many lives will follow.� �Fortunately for us, he is locked up in the detentionary of a Marauder Corvette that is on its way to NI headquarters. Obviously he must be taken back before the ship reaches the headquarters, so the element of time is to our disadvantage. You must be quick on this one.� �Although the size of the ship is relatively small, it's well guarded I can assure you that. The NI will do whatever they can to make sure that he arrives at the headquarters safely, so you'll have to be quick��Good luck� Raiders Squad saluted and turned on their data cards�it read: ------------------------------------------------- Your Equipment: - Standard Stormtrooper gear IP: 207.224.205.11 |
Anakin Citizen Posts: 241
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posted June 17, 2001 12:17 AM
Raziel's post Raziel looked down at the card and reflected on his orders and thought about the possible outcomes of this mission. Onboard the corvette we would probably have to get in and out quickly and avoid too much trouble at first. Sneaking around in a confined space was what he was used to, he smiled, and he had spent many years doing that. However if they were discovered it would probably degenerated into a close-up slog fests down tight corridors, he didn�t know the full fighting compliment of a Marauder Corvette, but with such an obviously highly regarded and important prisoner it would probably be more than a token force. The raiders would probably be hard pressed to get out safely in this happened and Raziel was not to sure how well he would hold his own in that situation, although he was certain he would be ok if melee broke out he would rack up a good few kills with knives. Raziel picked up a Gas grenade and added it to his gear; he was as good a through with grenades just as much as he was with knives. He looked around at his squad members and suddenly felt a complete certainty that they would complete this mission. He had seen Cosmic and Snake fight inhumanly in the heat of battle and he also suddenly realised that he would trust any of the people in this squad with his life. Trust was an unknown to him. He had grown up in one of the darkest cities he knew of where the only things he trusted were his sidearm, knives and thieving equipment. Realising he had become slightly detached from the group in his own thoughts he looked up. He could leave his contemplations for later, right now he had weapons to prime, knives to sharpen to that near-monomolecular edge he liked to hone them too and he was also charged with completely memorising the layout of the whole Corvette. He awaited what Cos had to say about all this.
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Anakin Citizen Posts: 241
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posted June 17, 2001 12:19 AM
Cosmic Sergeant Major Cosmic grouped his squad after the briefing. "Ok troops, here we are. In the competition that will eventually result in the next Elite Status Squad. As Colonel Anakin has said, we don't have much time to catch this corvette. That ship is heavily defended as said before. I plan to take a small, fast ship to the corvette. The small ship will be equiped with an Ion Cannon. Tell the engineers to attach it to the smallest, fastest ship ASAP. We don't have much time troops. I know this job can be fast, I want this done in fifteen minutes! MOVE!" The squad ran towards the engineers. ----Exactly 15 minutes later...---- "Sir, the ship is ready and the Ion Cannon is attached. We are ready for departure." "Excellent. All troops, get into the ship now! We are taking off!" The squad ran towards the ship. One at a time they crawled through the hatch. The air was a little humid but that could change. Cosmic started up the engine. The engine whined to life. "I want a go/no go for take off." Said Cosmic. "Engines." "Go." "Weapons Systems." "Go." "Ion Cannon." "Go." "Guidence Systems." "Go." "Menouvering Systems." "Go." "Great. We are go for take off." Cosmic pressed the button that started the thrusters. The craft slowly ascended into the sky. "Typing in coordinates of enemy Corvette now.....Coordinates set. Ok squad, I've set the ship on auto pilot for just a second, I wanted to talk to you guys. I know that we have all of our weapons in here that we need. Remember, here's the plan." Cosmic paused before beginning. "As soon as the corvette is in sensor range, we will fire a burst of speed. Raziel, you will aim the Ion Cannon at the corvette. The ion cannon will disable the corvettes weapons for a small amount of time. As soon as we do that, we will go side-by-side with the ship. We will evacuate this vessel and bring out our "cutters". We will also bring an extra Stormtrooper Uniform for the Moff. We will brake into the corvette by making a small hole in it's outer shell. The air will undoubtably be sucked out quickly. I want a quick search for the Moff himself. When you find him, let him put on the Stormtrooper uniform. Kill anyone and anything that gets in the way. As soon as he's ready, we will take the bridge and guide the ship back to VE base. It may sound easy but it's not. This is going to take skill, people. Now, get your gear ready and uniforms intact."
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Raziel Citizen Posts: 58
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posted June 17, 2001 10:16 AM
Raziel went about checking his equipment, but couldn�t shake the feeling that something was wrong, if they knew we were coming they could put up a huge resistance to an attack. "Sir, I just feel I have to ask a few things before we go." Raziel said "Go ahead" Cos replied "I�m just wandering about our way in, it�s just that they hold all of the advantages, we may be stormtroopers but they hold all of the advantages. They can kill the hostage at will; they have control of the ships systems and a hefty defence force to boot. Are you sure that going in guns blazing will work out so well, speed and surprise will work so why not give us more surprise, hell we may as well make this as easy as possible. This is just a suggestion but if we can divert the attention away from us as we go in we could surprise them more. As I said this is just a suggestion, but if I aim the ion cannon at their sensor arrays and we use the slicing tool on the ships computer when we get in, they may not realise that we are actually in until it is too late. Only a minor change in the plan, but it may make difference, what do you think sir?� "Hey what if we try a distaction of some kind to keep em, you know, looking in the other direction giving us more time?" Montys added
[This message has been edited by Raziel (edited June 17, 2001).] IP: 62.253.32. |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 17, 2001 04:43 PM
------RAIDERS------ Cosmic paused before speaking. "Raz, the enemy does NOT have all the advantages. This ship has extra long sensors, we see them on radar but they don't see us yet. We have the advantage of surprise...and...we have an ION CANNON. The cannon will not just disable weapons but it will disable the WHOLE ship for a limited amount of time. After we brake into the hull with the two plasma cutters, the oxygen will be sucked out. That gives us another advantage. These people won't likely be wearing any space-protected armor like us. They won't be able to go into rooms without oxygen." Cosmic paused once again. "Another thing. These guys are from the New Imperium. They are trying to make odds go their way by abducting a Moff. They wouldn't just shoot all their efforts. They would use him as a hostage first. Do all they can to keep him alive so that they can bring him to the NI base. That's another of our advantages. Tight Security will be there, but the most security will be where the Moff is held. The ships' corridors shouldn't be too well guarded." Cosmic checked out the sensor radar. "Were coming about. Raz......on my mark, blow the full speed....3.......2......1.......MARK! FIRE!" Raz quickly pressed the engine egnition. The ship went incredibly fast through space. The NI Corvette was getting bigger by the second. Cosmic was steering the ship into place. Epic was getting the extra Stormtrooper Uniform prepared and Montys1 was checking out to see if there were any escorts. "Ok, were side-by-side! get the cutters and let's move!" Yelled Cosmic through the comlink in his helmet. The squad quickly evacuated the ship...the floated outside of the tiny ship and landed onto limited-time crippled Corvette. "The engines are out too. The cannon bought us ten minutes." Yelled Cosmic. Kyp had one plasma cutter was was starting to cut through the hull. Raz had the other. Cosmic had his Stormtrooper Rifle read to destroy anything that moved. 2 minutes later, Kyp and Raz were finished. There was a hole, 3 feet in diameter. The troops crawled in. They felt the pull of oxygen leaving the ship and entering space. "Let's go! We have to do a little jog. We can't just walk...stay covered though! Don't do anything stupid!" Said Cosmic. Cosmic opened his pocket and pulled out his NI Security passes. The squad saw this and did the same. "Ok guys, follow me." Said Cosmic...and they walked down their first corridor to the Moff. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.23 |
g5 Citizen Posts: 156
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posted June 17, 2001 05:45 PM
"Cos, one small problem with your plan. we open the door to the moff, vacumm outside the cell, 1 atmosphere of pressure inside. he goes flying out and asphixiates faster than you can say **** . Now Raz if you don't mind please throw me the cutter. i'm gonna close that hole and then i have some tricks that i can do with this thing, ya know? i was a pirate once. Oh, one more thing cos. Just remembered stormie suits are temporary protection against a vacuum." Raz tossed Snake the plasma cutter as he went out to find the plate that had been cut out. He managed to get behind the huge chunk of metal and return it to it's resting place by controled bursts from the plasma cutter. swinging back inside the ship as the piece settled down. Kyp and Snake got to replacing it with the plasma cutters radiated heat and some well placed laser blasts. Needless to say it would stand a mouse droid bumping it but it did stop the air flow. "Now Cos, if you dom't mind i'll take rear guard and you can take point. now let's move out boys." Raziel inquired into what kind of tricks could be done with a cutter and snake just said that he had been a pirate once and knew some tricks. "watch and learn, bro." With that Raz tokk up his position and Snake got into a rear guard state of mind. "no room for mistakes, we need perfection guys" came across the intercom from Cosmic. ------------------ If it weren't for women we souldn't have civilization. Men invented civilization to impress their girlfriends--Orson Welles IP: 64.12.102.4 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 17, 2001 09:17 PM
---------RAIDERS--------- Cosmic had his stormtrooper rifle out, ready for anything. He then felt the one gas granade in it's hilt. Three people had gas granades: Cosmic, Snake, and Raz. They were distributed out between the three troops. Cosmic heard footsteps. He gave the signal to halt. He motioned for the squad to get in a ^shape, except that it was like this: Standing, kneeling, standing, kneeling. With this tactic, you could fire anything in front of you, top and bottom, and for a few seconds, probably confuse the enemy.Cosmic starting "counting" with his fingers...1.....2......3......"FIRE!" Cosmic quickly ran towards the door as soon as the last man was killed. He took out his security pass and slid it through the card-slide. "We have to move more quickly. I suspect we have about 7 minutes before the ships systems get back online. If we are going to do this speedily, I suggest we split up into groups. We can't afford to let this ship signal NI base. Then we'd be in real trouble." Cosmic thought for about 5 seconds. "Ok, here's the groups: me and snake, Raz and Kyp, and Epic and Montys. Snake and I are group one, Raz and Kyp, group two, and Epic and Montys, group three. Since there are three groups, each group will have 1 gas granade," said Cosmic, giving group three his granade. "Ok, Snake and I will go ahead and get the Moff ready. Group two, I want you guys to find your way into the communications room. Knock out any communications systems that they have. Group three, I want you two guys to take control of the bridge. There shouldn't be too many guards in there. Mostly coordinators, a captain, commander, and any other officers. We'll keep in contact by our comlinks. Let's do this quickly people. MOVE." Cosmic and Snake went through the door while the two other groups splitted up at a different corridor. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.22 |
g5 Citizen Posts: 156
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posted June 18, 2001 06:06 PM
Cos, i want point man, cover my six. Snake stood to the side of the door as he keyyed it open. As soon as there was a big enough gap to slide under he hit the deck and stayed prone while he searched the hall for Tangos."Clear". Just then the door got to point that Cos could pass through. Snake thanked his lucky stars that he was still slim. "ok, cos, next door you hit the switch, i'll go under and then you pop in and help clear it, ok?" "That should work. I hear troops on patrol, let's got them while their back is turned." ------------------ If it weren't for women we souldn't have civilization. Men invented civilization to impress their girlfriends--Orson Welles IP: 64.12.105.5 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 18, 2001 06:47 PM
Cosmic nodded as Snake said his last two words. "Ok, I hear them. Hey, I see a shadow, they're around that corner," said Cosmic pointing. Snake nodded and joined up with Cosmic on the other side of the door. "When I say so, we'll fire. I'll kneel why'll you stand. Make sure you use the wall as cover." Snake nodded and they both quietly walked to the lighted corridor. Cosmic slowly whipsered to Snake: "One....two...three...GO!" Cosmic did a little summersault and rolled into the line of fire at the enemy, but soon realized he was rolling in stormtrooper armor and couldn't get up. Snake fired shots at the enemy hitting a good number of them. However, when the squad turned the corner, the unexpected happened. They quickly found out that they were severly out numbered by 5 to 1. Cosmic got back up on his feet and they quickly took a few more shots hitting a few when snake turned and went behind the wall, soon after Cosmic followed. "This is not good" Cos said to Snake. Soon after they could here the 2 squads of soldiers marching down the hall after them. Cosmic and Snake quickly ran down the hall to the nearest door, opened it and ran into the room, and closed the door. However what they didn't realize was this was is one of the lower levels of the cell bay. They were trapped with no where to go but out the way they came...... ***This post has been edited***
[This message has been edited by Anakin (edited June 18, 2001).] IP: 209.142.9.10 |
g5 Citizen Posts: 156
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posted June 18, 2001 07:46 PM
"Cos, i have a plan. On 3 hit the switch to open the door. i'll roll the grenade out. As soon as it goes off we run out and take as many of them down as possible. As soon as the smoke clears and they start shooting back retreat and close the door. 1...2...3!" Snake pulled thepin and rolled the grenade under the doorwith about 1 cm to spare. after waiting about 3 seconds they heard the tell-tale "phish" of the grenade going off and they rushed in. ------------------ If it weren't for women we souldn't have civilization. Men invented civilization to impress their girlfriends--Orson Welles IP: 64.12.105.4 |
Raziel Citizen Posts: 58
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posted June 19, 2001 07:22 AM
Raziel slipped through the next door that he had hotwired, not making a sound. He had done this kind of thing before. It was a shame that Cos had the clearance card, but Raz was used to hotwiring doors and sneaking about, after all breaking into tight security buildings had been part of his first profession. Kyp was just behind him to the side, his rifle raised, ready to fire so Raziel could concentrate on finding the way and listening for guards. Kyp's footsteps sounded incredibly loud to his sensitive ears, but Raz knew that speed was the key and that should it come to a firefight Kyp was a much better shot than him. Raziel subconsciously fingered the blackened throwing knives held in a brace at his belt. Relics of his past, the blackened surfaces were a stupid gesture when compared to his bright white armour, but they came in handy now an again. He had rejected the offer of replacement vibro-knives because of the noise they made, Raziel preferred to rely on accuracy to make the kill. They kept jogging along down corridors, Raz had the ships plans memorized fully and they carried on moving up into the back of the ship where the communications were housed. They had no charges so they would have to rely on blasting the equipment, Raz didn�t know much about communications systems only how to tap into them, he hoped Kyp did. A slight sound alerted Raziel�s keen senses and he held out his arm. Kyp stopped and cocked his head, now also hearing the sound. It was the faint sound of footsteps. Booted feet probably those of a guard, heavy breathing also indicated he had been in a hurry. After a quick scan of the surroundings Raziel removed a long slender combat knife from his back, he had a pair of them, just as old as the throwing knives and also blackened to hide the give away glint of metal. He waved Kyp back indicating him to lower his rifle; it would be best not to attract unwanted attention. Two things saved Raz�s life now; one was that the limp corpse in his arms absorbed a lot of the incoming hail of blaster shots and the other was the close proximity of Kyp who had not been distracted and had noticed the other soldiers. Still Raziel took a heavy hit on his left arm, and two others, which merely glanced his armour and caused only mild injury. Whilst Raziel got himself back to his feet Kyp laid down an effective barrage if cover fire which soon lead the troop of guards to realise how little cover they had. The two raiders took this opportunity to flee the scene of the skirmish and hide within a small high security chamber. Raziel assessed his injury and tested the arm; the flow of blood had now stopped, partly thanks to the burning of the flesh. He found the arm, when tested was less than effective but would still support a rifle. Listening to the comms Raziel realised the other groups weren�t have so much luck either. They had spread out too much, even when they were outnumbered and were now suffering. Raziel noted that the guards HAD responded effectively to the threat and were not simply going to wait for the stormtroopers to come to them. Grimacing against the pain Raziel assured Kyp he was fine and that they should push on. Then Raziel noted the vents above them, he recalled that one main ventilation shaft ran the whole, length of the ship and ended at the engine rooms, above which was the communications centre was and it was the only vent big enough for people to go through. A fair few guards new where they were now so they would need some alternative. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 19, 2001 08:21 PM
(oh Raz, I'm not the only one with the sec. card. We all have one ) -------RAIDERS------- Cosmic sniffed once...twice...then turned to Snake. "Snake, I'll give you a boost, as soon as you get up there, you pull me up. Here, get on my shoulders." Said Cosmic, kneeling down. Snake put one foot on Cosmic's shoulder, then the other. Cosmic slowly rised up. Cosmic grabbed Snake's feet with his hands, slowly pushing him upwards. The muscles in his arms were pressing against the armor on his arm. Cosmic was halfway up when suddenly he heard voices: Cosmic quickly brought his legs up and motioned Snake to go forward. Cosmic quickly glanced at the vent door on the ground. They'd know were up in the vent... "Snake, we have to move!" Whispered Cosmic. The vent door is on the ground! They'll find out were here in no time!" Snake nodded and quickly crawled faster. Cosmic followed, trying to make as little noise as possible. "Cosmic to group two. You guys ok?" "Yes sir, we read you." Said Raziel. "Look, I took a blow to the arm. I'm ok though. Kyp's doing fine. Were hiding from the enemy at the moment. They got a lot of peeps down here with guns lookin' for us." "Hang in there Raz. Listen, we've also been busy with enemy troops. Were in a vent now, heading for the upper level, towards the Detentionary." "We'll figure something out fast. We have to go. Group two out." Cosmic terminated his comlink. Cosmic and Snake quickly moved towards the upper level. Twists and turns complicated their navigation. . . . Cosmic opened a vent door and they both crawled out. Cosmic saw another wall-computer and turned it on. "This is so we don't have to look at one of these all the time." Said Cosmic. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.23 |
Raziel Citizen Posts: 58
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posted June 20, 2001 05:28 PM
(Erm thx for stealing my idea on the vents and contradicting me Cos if you'd asked before hand then I could have edited it) Raziel covered Kyp as he made his way to the next door; Kyp slid the card through the reader whilst Raz kept his rifle levelled at the door. This was the fifth time they had gone through this procedure on their way to the comms centre and had so far managed to avoid the soldiers sweeping the area for them. "Here�s the one," said Raziel, indicating the turn in the corridor ahead of them. Suddenly Raziel thought about the ship, the guards had been out searching for them some of them could have quite easily found the ship. Still it would probably be best not to alert anyone that they were here. Raziel stepped boldly out into the corridor and threw two knives. Both guards hit the floor clutching their throats. After a few seconds it was over, the guards lay dead and the smoke was clearing revealing a handful of choking workers at their stations, the raiders had taken out all five men without seeing a single one of them. Raziel held his gun up towards one of the comms workers and motioned him towards the far wall whilst Kyp searched the bodies and made sure they were dead.
[This message has been edited by Raziel (edited June 21, 2001).] IP: 62.253.32. |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 20, 2001 05:55 PM
(sorry I didn't know you were going to use the vents Raz. I thought I made that up on my own.) -------RAIDERS------- "No Raz, were doing fine. Were on the second level now, just got to get past a few more decks. Listen, I need you to complete my orders and disable their communications systems. We can't afford to get any enemy back-ups. Don't destroy the communications systems, just shut it down until we take control of the ship. We'll call you if we need help. Good luck." Cosmic turned to Snake. Snake followed Cosmic towards a corridor. A huge explosion erupted from the room, creating a huge gap between neighboring walls. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.20 |
Raziel Citizen Posts: 58
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posted June 21, 2001 03:30 AM
"No no Cosmic says to STOP shooting equipment,� shouted Raziel as he rapidly replaced the pins in the grenade "Damn I was enjoying that,� replied Kyp "Yeah, yeah I know but apparently we have to hold this place till we have control of the ship, so just shut it down" "Since when were we taking over the ship? I thought the plan was to get the Moff and run away, very fast" "Well Epic and Montys were heading for the bridge so I don't know how they're doing, uh oh hold on we've got company coming" Raz held his arm out and listened intently. "About 20 men coming Kyp, ok there another way out of this place?" Kyp motioned towards a door at the back of the room that led to the engines. "Right we'd better take cover then, just make sure you can get to the door!" At that 5 soldiers burst through the door and opened fire. Raz and Kyp were in enough cover at the time to keep their heads down and return fire. There were about fifteen guards that had come to investigate the noise, but they all had to come through a door and Raziel and Kyp kept shooting the first man that tried to get in. but slowly the guards managed to force their way in, they killed a few more and Raz threw one of the grenades they had recently come into possession of to cover their retreat. They slipped threw the door and descended into the bowels of the ship through various engine rooms, whilst closely followed. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
g5 Citizen Posts: 156
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posted June 21, 2001 04:27 PM
"Ok, guys work your way toward the holding cells. were dealling with our guards and we can help you out. get here fast." "OK, be right there." Just then a guard got a luchy shot and hit Snake in his right arm. It was cauterized by the blaster bolt but it still hurt. "Cos, new plan. We get the moff and get out. now i think i'll have some fun with this plasma cutter. hold 'em off for a few more seconds." With that snake went to the far wall and started to cut a chunk just big enough for the armor to fit through out of the bulkhead. "Cos, get through this hole, now. i'll cover for ya" Cos squeezed through while Snake laid down cover fire. The guards started to break through the cover firew right then and rush towards him. He looked back and realized the Cos was all the way through his hole and he could retreat now. He squeased through the hole while taking hits in the legs. His armor held, but just barely. As soon as he was through he turned and started picking of guards through the hole. By then one had reached it and was diving through. as soon as he landed Snake picked up the corpse and used it as a shield covering most of the hole. "Cos, call epic and get him down here. have him and montys get the moff out." ------------------ If it weren't for women we souldn't have civilization. Men invented civilization to impress their girlfriends--Orson Welles IP: 152.163.201.20 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 21, 2001 06:36 PM
---------RAIDERS---------- Cosmic quickly glanced at Snake's wound then went through the hole. He helped Snake get through and then started firing on the guards. A blaster shoot came about one inch from Cosmic's face. When he opened his eyes, his face had been a little burned. Cosmic fired twice and hit to men. They fell with a thud. Snake fired as well. Cosmic joined in and started firing constantly. As soon as the enemy men were down, Cosmic turned to Snake. "From what this map says, if we open this door, there is a room filled with supplies." A thermal detonator! Cosmic quickly aimed his weapon at the thermal detonator, which was active! Cosmic was about to fire but was quickly shot on the right side of his chest by several rounds from the repeater weapon. Snake saw Cosmic fall to the ground. Snake shot at the thermal detonator.....BOOOOOOOOOOOM! The two men were killed, no doubt. The force field protected the Moff against the blast. Snake quickly turned on his commlink. "Attention Squad two, Raz! Kyp! Cosmic has been hit! You've got to get to the Detentionary room now! The guards are down, so you won't have much resistance, if any! Hurry! I've got the Moff intact as well!" Snake turned back to Cosmic after turning off his comlink. ------------------ [This message has been edited by TJ (edited June 22, 2001).] IP: 209.142.8.1 |
TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted June 22, 2001 10:06 PM
~*Plot Twist*~ (I don't know if Im doing this right since it's my first time so bear with me) "Snake, we are in trouble. I repeat, Snake "What is the problem? Why can't you reach us?" "We seem to be blocked off by at least two squads worth of troops. Back-up I suppose. Anyway, Kyp is holding them off at the moment, but we're going to be a little delayed. Over and out." With that, the com shut off. Snake looked at Cosmic, who was still out cold on the ground. He would have to figure out something and fast. Who knew how long it'd be until more troops found them as well... ------------------ IP: 24.112.158.22 |
Raziel Citizen Posts: 58
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posted June 24, 2001 04:02 PM
Raziel and Kyp were running threw tightly packed engineering rooms filled with machinery when they got the message. Raziel stopped dead. Raziel had been recruited by Cosmic, sure Raz had been drunk at the time but he was grateful now and Cos could be dying. Raziel was pissed off, seriously pissed off. He could hear the sounds of about 20 booted feet behind him but he turned around. "Kyp, cover me" Raziel dropped his rifle and primed a grenade. When the sounds of pursuit were loudest he threw the grenade and dived into the maze of machinery, tubes and wires. Kyp was lying on the group with his rifle held steadily in the direction of the explosion. Two guards came running out, neither looking at the way ahead as they escaped the shrapnel of the explosion. After two precision shots they were both dead. Meanwhile Raziel was stalking another group of soldiers who had split after the explosion. He figured about three had died from the grenade, more possibly wounded and Kyp said another two were down. That left fifteen all spread out and lost. Raz held one combat knife in his right hand in a knife grip whist he kept the second in a sword grip in the left. By the time he found the next group Kyp had downed another two and was fleeing from five more. That left ten for Raz. He didn�t even think of the odds, only that he had to get to Cos as fast as possible. In fact when he strolled into all of them at once he didn�t even slow down. Two of them were down with slashed jugulars before the 7ft sergeant commanding them could utter a word. The other two managed to get shots in before Raz could reach them. Raz took a hit in the chest but it was from a pistol with obviously low stopping power and didn�t even pierce his armour. Still moving away from the rapidly pursuing group of soldiers Raziel picked up another rifle and returned fire as he fled. The sergeant had called in the rest of the men and he realised that there was almost no way to get back to Cosmic unless they came up with something. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 25, 2001 03:23 PM
-----------RAIDERS----------- Epic and Montys heard guards from just around the next corridor. The turbo lift was amazingly quiet on it's journey upwards. Epic saw the levels increasing near the turbo lift door. "Epic to Cosmic," began Epic through his comlink within his helmet. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.14 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 26, 2001 04:37 PM
--------------RAIDERS-------------- Epic set the coordinates to the VE base into the helms computer system.
"Good job, Snake." Replied Raziel. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.13 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 26, 2001 08:53 PM
-----------RAIDERS-------------- Epic and Montys were just around the next corridor to the two squads keeping Kyp and Raziel pinned down. They walked down the corridors and headed towards the Detentionary. ------------------ IP: 209.142.8.9 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 27, 2001 05:09 PM
----------RAIDERS------------ Sergeant Major Cosmic still has been lying on the floor, wounded. Even though the Bacta seems to be helping greatly, Cosmic needed to see a medical doctor immediately. Snake has been talking to the Moff for sometime now, and Epic, Montys, Raziel, and Kyp had arrived at the Detetionary, helping Cosmic with some of the needs. Epic put in his passcode and brought up the scanners. Epic aimed manualy at the pods and fired three rounds each at the pods. The lasers flew through space at immence speed. They hit the pods....shields protected the pods. "Sir! These pods have shields on them!" BOOM!The ship intensly shook and sparks flew everywhere."They got a hit out of us sir! With their lasers!" "What?? How can the ship get so much dama....wait a sec...do you have the shields up?" "No sir! I can't figure that out! I don't see any type of shielding device here." Snake looked at Kyp.. "Kyp, get up there and help Epic...were not out of this and I don't know how those pods can have what they have!" "Yes sir!" Kyp ran to the Bridge. "Sir! Their coming about again! Their firing!" The corvette took another blow. Four torpedos emerged from the Corvette...two torpedos were heading to each pod. ------------------ IP: 209.209.106.13 |
Cosmic Citizen Posts: 558
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posted June 29, 2001 10:14 PM
-----------RAIDERS--------------- BOOM! One of the pods exploded, the other pod outmenouevered the two torpedos and started firing on the ship. The torpedos left the ship and started at the pod at an enormous rate of speed. Raziel and Montys searched around the supply room in search of any useful items: Food, water, more bacta, etc. So far, they found a weeks rations of food and water for their squad members and the Moff but no bacta. Epic and Kyp ran around the Bridge, getting used to the controls of the consols and the view screen. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.9.18 |
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posted June 30, 2001 11:32 AM
(Guys! Please start posting! I don't want to do it all by myself!) -------------RAIDERS------------ Twenty minutes later... Snake walked over to the Moff. "Sir, we are about to land and it might get a little bumpy. I suggest that you find something to hold on to." The ship soared through the air towards the clearing. It's landing gear down, the corvette slowly descended towards the ground.....touchdown. One half hour later.... Snake turned to Epic as soon as he walked through the door. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.8.7 |
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posted June 30, 2001 03:30 PM
-------------RAIDERS------------ Sergeant Major Cosmic still lay on the elevated bed in SickBay. Snake was in charge of everything while Cosmic was out of commission. The mechanics were really doing a great job on progress with the engine..... "Kyp and Montys, come in, over." Said Snake. Epic watched the mechanics do their jobs with no hesitation. He decided to walk forward and see what they were actually doing. Kyp and Montys were about a half mile away from the ship now. Scouting. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.209.106.17 |
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posted July 01, 2001 06:26 PM
---------RAIDERS--------- Several hours passed and the mechanics were practically almost done with the damage. "Were at our limit in miles anyway. We've found some sort of 'rockyard'. It's just full of huge rocks. I can't explain it sir. It's hard to describe." "Well don't get too close, just in case this planet DOES have anything alive on it. It'd be hard to say that it wouldn't with all the green it has on it. Better head back to the ship..You guys have done good. Get a record on your position so that we can come back to it later." "Yes sir. Kyp out." As soon as they were about a hundred feet away from the pile of "rocks", a pair of eyes quickly went back into hiding as soon as it was done analyzing it's new encounters.... Cosmic walked around the bridge a little and stared out at the view screen. (sORRY for the short post.. I've got to go!) ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.209.106.1 |
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posted July 01, 2001 07:19 PM
------------RAIDERS---------- (Resuming from top post) Cosmic sniffed and took a deep breath as he gazed at the endless greenery of the planet. Raziel and Kyp stopped and rested near a patch of trees. Epic stood in the engine room as the mechanics did their jobs. Suddenly, he saw the mechanics stand up. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.9.5 |
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posted July 02, 2001 04:51 PM
Raziel strolled back towards the ship with Kyp, they were only a mile from the ship now and it would soon be coming into view. Raziel had thought about Kyp's feelings that he had heard something and kept alert, exceptionally alert. He had always had to know when someone was behind him and know he was glad he did. Raziel noticeably stiffened but carried on walking, at the first opportunity he signalled to Kyp, but made sure that Kyp did not look where he thought he heard the noises of pursuit. Kyp fingered the trigger of the rifle held loosely at his side and Raziel removed a throwing knife with his left hand whilst keeping a firm grip on the sidearm he had taken from a dead NI officer. He and Kyp tried not to make it look like they were alert to the presence of whoever was following them, but they sped up noticeably. �Snake, this is Raz,� Raziel whispered into the comms. Snake went to the comms to Epic and Montys. Raziel and Kyp were in site of the ship now, whoever or whatever was following them was getting closer, even Kyp could hear it now. Raziel was not so sure as to what it was now; the footsteps were not distinctly human. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
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posted July 02, 2001 05:19 PM
Epic saw Raz being attacked by an unknown alien species...probably the natives of the planet. He quickly ran towards them, stormtrooper rifle in hand and started firing furiously at the being. Cosmic was right beside him, with his stormtrooper rifle and aimed at the creatures head. Kyp was lucky enough to escape the beings grasp and backed up, just far enough for him to fire. Raz was on the ground, being attacked by the creature, the creature clawed at him, but Raz's chest armor protected him a little. Very slowly, though, the creatures claws were digging through his armor. Raziel had his knife out and started stabbing the being into where he thought the hart was...right in the chest. The being itself was almost human-like. The headshape was oval and so were the eyes. The being had long arms that reached to it's feet and sharp, needle-like claws at it's finger tips. The creature was approximately six feet tall and looked about 190 pounds. It had two legs, like humans, except they were huge, unlike the arms and the rest of the body. Looks like the creature was made for running and gaining on pray. Raz's knife seemed to be working...dark red blood started squirting out of the creatures chest. It's head started moving back and forth in a fast motion. Epic, Kyp, and Cosmic ran to Raz who was helping himself up, shakily though. "You ok Raz?" Asked Kyp who was immediately checking out the scarring on the armor.. Cosmic analyzed the scarring on the armor and then turned up towards Raz. As soon as they got to the ship, Raz walked with Cosmic to SickBay, Epic and Kyp stayed Montys to watch the guards. "Ok, let's have a look here..take off the armor. After you do so, you can leave." "That being must've been a full grown being..." said Cosmic to himself.. He then went to Snake to speak of the problem with these new natives that are obviously hostile... ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.9.16 |
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posted July 02, 2001 08:26 PM
Snake stared at the clawed uniform with the red substance in SickBay with Cosmic. "What do you think this stuff is?" Asked Snake. Cosmic shook his head. "I don't know. I wonder if this ship has any microscopes that we could use and some tweezers." Snake shrugged his shoulders. "What would you expect from a war ship? Heh, I doubt that they even have a decent food place." Cosmic snickered. Well, I'll keep this in a special container I found made for hazardous material. That should keep it contained until we reach VE base...hopefully within a few hours." Snake nodded and started to walk away and head back to the Bridge, but he stopped when Cosmic called his name. Snake turned to face Cosmic. "Yes sir?" "I want a status report on the engine...see if we can't get out of this place sooner. Also, the troops have been through a lot, let them have a little rest...put them on shifts or something so they can get a little shut-eye." Snake nodded. "Yes sir." Cosmic nodded his head and Snake left with his orders. Cosmic went to the Bridge and sat down in a chair, presuming to be the Captain's chair and planned ahead for better or for worse... Epic was talking with Montys and Kyp when Snake came appeared from the door. Epic and Montys stared up at the sky, watching the clouds. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.9.7 |
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posted July 03, 2001 11:45 AM
Everyone stood, staring around the ship, the mechanics had no idea what was around them so they just kept working as usual. Snake suddenly spotted something red at the corner of his eye. "There!" Said Snake, raising his blaster rifle.....nothing. "Well, they sure disappear fast." Said Cosmic. Kyp nodded. Suddenly, the heard a rustling in the bushes, then.....the Being. "Welp, these guys are intelligent alright." Five more approached from the forest. "TAKE THIS YOU PIECE OF C***!" Yelled Epic as he fired his blaster. The aliens got hit with the blasters and kept charging.. Everyone fired towards the aliens' hands...sure enough, the aliens stopped charging as soon as the blaster shot hit their claws. "It's working!" Yelled Montys. Suddenly, ten came from the bushes...then twenty..." "We can't keep trying to fire at them like this! Were losing ammo!" Yelled Snake. Cosmic and Snake ran into the ship and into the Detentionary with Cosmic's plan to destroy these attacking Being's. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.9.16 |
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posted July 03, 2001 02:28 PM
The squad, with the exception of Cosmic were backing away from the creatures now. Now half of them would fire off shots whilst backtracking whilst the other half, crouching behind them, would lay down a constant barrage of fire to keep to creatures at bay. These things were exceptionally fast but their advance was beginning to falter. Raziel was glad he was very fast with his blades; otherwise he wouldn't currently be breathing. Raziel looked back and saw how close to the ship they were now; if they were forced back in there they would also die in that ship he knew. They only stood a chance in an open space. They were all beginning to notice their predicament; they were fast running out of ammo and space. Raziel looked down at his knives then at the creatures bearing down on them. He hoped his ammo lasted. Raziel was incredibly surprised when two of the engineers came towards them with pistols and began firing at the red attackers. They must of realised they would die if the troopers lost, he wondered if they would do more harm or good. He also wondered where they got their weapons. They were falling back onto the ship now. The clearing around the ship was littered with bodies, but they were running very low on ammo. Looking around Raziel saw that he was one of the few members of the group with combat weapons, not that they would do much good. Raziel dropped his rifle and was down to his sidearm. There was nowhere left to go now. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
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posted July 03, 2001 04:12 PM
The four soldiers kept firing until the animals were on top of them. One of them dived at the raiders but was quickly shot to pieces. About 15 on the animals kept coming at them though. At least they were no longer running, after a barrage of firing in the faces of the foremost creatures the whole lot of them had slowed down. �Hold you fire, only shoot when one attacks,� Raziel shouted. The creatures were circling them now looking for an opening in the group, they were happy to carry on circling slowly as long as they weren�t being shot at. The raiders gave them no such opening and almost as one, three creatures broke off and dived in a suicidal manner at them. Following precision shots from Epic and Kyp two creatures fell dead. The third would have broken into the group were it not for Montys who planted himself squarely in the path of the creature and fired off and many shots as he could. Montys was pummelled to the ground but soon came out from underneath the corpse. As Montys stood up shakily and retook his position another group of the creatures charged. �Hold fast!� shouted Raziel. �We have to hold the entrance!� Raziel saw that his own ammo count was dangerously low; he was down to 16 shots and one spare pack. At this rate they would be attempting hand-to-hand combat with these things in a matter of minutes. Raziel didn�t like the prospects and doubted they would last long in such an affair. �Cosmic what the hell are you doing? We really need you down here!� Raziel reloaded his pistol and loosed off three shots at an advancing native. He let the slight recoil of the gun affect his aim so that the shots hit the creature in the leg, then the chest and finally the head. A hail of hot blasts smashed into the group of aliens, a few of them fell dead or nearing death, some of them shrugged off the blows but still more came on. The aliens could have been held back indefinitely had the raiders shots not faltered as people ran out of ammo. Still due to an exceptional training the soldiers held their ground, each man was covered by another man as he reloaded and they fell back in such a way that not one of the creatures got close enough to lash out with its deadly claws. Unfortunately it didn�t last, just when the raiders had begun to hold their ground one of the beast got past. It managed to dive over their heads, turned and dived at Montys, who was unfortunately standing behind the other three men. Raziel stopped still and his mouth formed a silent O until he saw Epic claw his way to his feet with only a bad head injury to show for it. Raziel hoped that hadn�t been caused by claws. Kyp was back-pedalling frantically from another three of them; somehow he was still hitting them accurately with a rifle. Raziel had no idea how he could possibly be doing that. Raziel only had a brief pause before one of them dived at him. Raziel ducked under the blow and brought a combat knife up under the attack deep into the things belly, there was no time for celebrations before another knocked him from his feet. Raziel held both knives before him at the ready and braced himself; well he would die with his weapons in his hands and his enemies in front of him. One creature retreated when Raziel severed its left claw and another would have had him had it not been for Kyp. Raziel heard the sound of boots on metal and a loud clang just before another dived at him. This creature cut straight through the armour on his left arm, he didn�t feel any pain even if he had been injured but lost his balance. He would have been dead for certain this time had the creature not been hit twelve times before it even realised it was dead. Cosmic and Snake were busy repositioning the Heavy rifles, whilst Epic, Raziel and Kyp tended any injuries they had. The Moff was still safe within the ship, but shortly after their victory they had found Montys� helmet. Unfortunately they had found nothing else of Montys. Cosmic and Snake were currently discussing a plan of action. The engineers were back to working on the engines. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
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posted July 03, 2001 08:52 PM
"Ok troops," began Cosmic. "Looks like these Beings have kidnapped Montys. We are going to rescue him immediately, but first, we must devise a plan...meaning we must find out where they're base is hidden first." Cosmic looked around at the troops who were silent. "Anyone got any ideas on where this thing might live?" Suddenly, Kyp spoke up. "Yes sir!" Cosmic's eyes lit up, thinking that no one knew. "What is it, Kyp?" "That strange rock formation that Raz and I passed by while we were on patrol...those rocks were very strange as if they were glued together or something...That also the place where we first spotted the first red light. That must be there base. I've also recorded the coordinates like Snake said so we could find our way back to that thing." "Excellent," said Cosmic. "We will get ready to leave in a few minutes, but first, we have to decide about some things. This is the Being's fortress, we don't know how many lifeforms are down there. It'll take all of us to rescue Montys because I'm not taking any chances," said Cosmic. "So far, the mechanics have been trustworthy, they've even help defend against those Being's. My thought is is that they can come and help us as well. We'll just seal the ship tight and make sure no one gets into it before we come back." The troops nodded their heads. "We'd have to give the mechanics weapons to use against those Beings." Said Raz. "Yes sir." Said Epic, and he left outside to where the mechanics worked. "In the meantime," said Cosmic. "We are going to have to stock up big time for this rescue mission. I want to bring all the knives we can get on this mission...bring all the ammo and weapons we have...this thing takes a mighty hard punch and doesn't go down easy. Understood?" Everyone nodded. "Well," began Cosmic. "First things first. I want all of you to report to SickBay to get your scratches all fixed up, then we go get our stuff." Everyone agreed and immediately walked towards SickBay where they helped themselves to the bacta, each giving themselves just a small amount. "Sir," said Snake. "Shouldn't we bring along some bacta too? Just in case there are more injuries." "Excellent thinking, Snake...give the order immediately." Snake nodded and quickly told everyone else. The came in a few minutes later with Epic right behind them. One mechanic walked up to Cosmic. "Sir, the engine is almost completely repaired. However, we only need two more hours." "Very well. Have you been informed of our newly aquired mission?" The mechanics nodded. "Ok, very well, go get your pistols and report back here afterwards." Said Cosmic. "So how'd they get those pistols?" Cosmic nodded. "At least I think they're on our side so far. They want to get off the planet as much as we do." ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.8.10 |
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posted July 03, 2001 10:39 PM
The squad was outside the ship with all their weapons and bacta ready in backpacks. Snake and Cosmic were locking up the corvette. After they did so, they both walked to the squad and looked around. The mechanics had their laser pistols out and the squad had their stormtrooper rifles poised. "Ok, let's have a check." Said Cosmic. They the squad followed Kyp and Raz back to where they saw the huge rock formation. The walk took about twenty minutes. Finally, they arrived at their destination. "Ok, everyone set?" Asked Cosmic. "Sir! Get away from there! The rocks are doing something." Yelled Kyp. Everyone started walking through the tunnel one by one... "Sir, this tunnel is made out of metal. Looks like these guys have found a way to create this stuff." Said Snake. Cosmic nodded his head. "Well, follow me." Said Cosmic, leading the way through the dark entrance. After about a minute of pure walking, they saw light up ahead. Tens of thousands of those Beings were inhabiting the place! Adults and young Beings were walking through tunnels, carrying cargo, crates....bodies. "Looks like were not the only humans who had landed on this planet before...So far there's no sign of Montys. "Ok guys, there's thousands of these Beings in this place. Any suggestions?" Asked Cosmic. ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.8.2 |
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posted July 04, 2001 03:48 PM
Cosmic saw a bunch of crates at one corner very close to them..he motioned with his finger to them...the squad nodded...Cosmic fingered the 1....2....3 count...the squad stealthly ran past the Beings that weren't looking and got behind the crates. "Ok," began Snake, whispering. "What's the plan sir?" Raziel ran to the nearest crate and ducked behind it. The whole building was a dome structure with black ceilings and black floors. He was about fifty feet away from the vault. Waiting for the explosion to be heard, he waited until Cosmic blew it. Cosmic poked his head up and looked around. He saw thousands of beings...not knowing where to look. "Sir, aren't those carbonite containers over there?" Cosmic saw the laser blast emit from the gun and soar through the room...it hit the containers and a huge explosion erupted. All the Beings stopped what they were doing and immediately got into a combat-like position...some of the Beings ran to the Carbonite to stop the emitting carbon. Raziel saw his chance...two Beings dropped two bodies and ran to help the others. Raz ran towards the vault....forty feet.......thirty....20...almost there! He looked around and saw that no one noticed him yet...10....he made it! He quickly got inside the vault and took cover behind the huge door. Cosmic saw Raz run and nod to himself. Cosmic gave Raz a thumbs up, he watched as Raz returned it...then he saw Raz disappear into the vault. "He's in." Said Cosmic. Cosmic watched as the thousands of beings started getting into their combat positions...he wondered what Raz had encountered so far.... ------------------ "Victory is not the true objective, the true objective is learning how you won." - SGM Cosmic IP: 209.142.9.9 |
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posted July 04, 2001 04:56 PM
Ignorant or simply just not heeding the explosion outside the vault two of the creatures walked on with 3 bodies being dragged un-caringly. Suddenly one of the corpses moaned and shuddered. The creatures dropped the bodies and one of them, almost lazily, ripped the throat out of the offending humans neck. The man would not die too quickly. They carried on dragging the bodies, no having a chance to see the shadow that detached itself from the wall and run away. Raziel had spent eleven years, from the age of ten, before the army doing this kind of thing. However these creatures were superhuman, they appeared to have exceptional senses, much alike Raziel�s. Their falling point however, as Raz had found, their eyes ere very close at the front of their faces. Although they had incredible three-dimensional eyesight, they had an incredibly narrow field of vision. They made up for this somewhat by keeping constantly vigilant. Raziel was somewhat amused by the way their heads were always quickly jerking to the sides. As long as he kept quiet and well hidden he would have no problem getting in, getting out would be a completely different matter. He looked down at the black clothes he currently wore in the absence of armour and compared them to the brilliant white armour Montys would be wearing. He didn�t like to think of the prospects of having to carry another man out of here. Raziel was amazed at how advanced these creatures really were. They had built themselves his entire complex and had some strange but advanced technology. He should have noticed something out of the ordinary by the way they had attacked earlier, but only cosmic had noticed it. He had no idea how this place was dimly lit; there was no sign of any light source at all. One thing he failed to understand was why they didn�t use weapons? Maybe they had never been researched here, or maybe there was some kind of ban like people had tried to impose upon super weapons being used against civilians. Upon entering the chamber Raziel had found that it was in fact a corridor to begin with, three actually. They were probably where all people entering would be checked, but if there were any guards Cosmic and the others had distracted them sufficiently. Raziel was slipping along the sides of the cylindrical corridor at the moment, you could have been five feet away from him and you would never even notice his presence. Suddenly the corridor opened out into the biggest chamber Raziel had ever seen. Thousand and thousands of bodies were lined up on table, a green mist filled each and there was a layer of it on the floor. Realising where he was Raziel stopped gawking and hit the floor. How the hell was he meant to find a single person in amongst these bodies? Raziel lay in thought for a few moments before edging his way further into the chamber; with the darkness and mist he could hide here for days. The problem arose with having to try and stand up and spot gleaming white armour. Hundreds of the creatures were slowly moving around the place, going from chamber to chamber. Doing what Raziel didn�t want to know. It took him fifteen minutes to slide his way to the area where newer corpses were being dragged to, he had had to dodge creature at every turn. When he got their he managed to edge his way up to his feet against a wall and managed to position himself so as to appears as one of the shadows. For another twenty minutes he stayed perfectly still observing the room. He remembered the time five years ago when he had stayed motionless in the room of some drugs baron for two days, because of motion sensors. The man had eventually returned and hadn�t even seen his death coming; currently Raziel was employing these skills in a very different manner. Soon another batch of the prisoners were brought across, Raziel didn�t know what the rest of his squad were doing outside at this moment but it was loud, very loud. Raziel roughly picked up Montys and slung him over one shoulder, hefting a pistol in his free hand. Turning to the entrance he saw about ten creatures turning back towards him, obviously disturbed by the noise. Raziel turned and fled, there was only one way out left. A small tunnel at the back of the passage that only led downwards. With adrenalin pumped legs Raziel disappeared down the passageway, closely followed by five grunting aliens. ------------------ IP: 62.253.32. |
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posted July 04, 2001 08:51 PM
((this goes before Cos's last post there)) As snake realized the original distraction was wearing off he remembered a trick from his past. originally done with a smaller blade he figured he could work it with a plasma cutter. "cos, cut into these crates and find something to distract them long enugh for me to get into a different hiding spot. i have a way to confuse them and take one or 2 down" "ok, i've got something" Cos tossed the flare out onto the floor as he lit it. the light attracted the attention of the aliens and Snake managed to slip away to another group of crates. he wispered thanks and co ngratulations over the com. waiting for one of the last Beasts to walk by he grabbed the cutter and got ready to start it. then about the last thing came by his set of crates and as soon as it's back was turned snake slid out and lit up the cutter. as soon as it was operating he reacxhed up and ran the cutting beam along the beasts cartoid artery on the right and then on the left. as soon as the slice was made he was back behind the crates. By the time the beast even realized anything was happening Snake was hidden and the cutter was off. Drawn by the woulnded creatures screams all the other aliens turned towards him. They couldn�t understand how their friends life had been drained so quickly with no apparent cause. All the commotion and noise this caused was also suficient to draw the attention of Raz�s pursuers just lang enough to drop into the mist with Montys. The beasts walked right past Raz and Montys without noticing. A few minutes later, after there were no sounds to be heard Raz started dragging Montys up the tunnel and out into the large caverns. ------------------ If it weren't for women we souldn't have civilization. Men invented civilization to impress their girlfriends--Orson Welles IP: 152.163.201.18 |
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posted July 05, 2001 10:53 PM
Anakin stops the training simulation and walks in where the troops are standing. "Ok first off I'd just like to say sorry for not catching this quicker and waisting posts." Ok I'd like to take a quote from the Elite Squad Competition Outline.
Now realisitcally an entire squad would have absolutely no chance against a force sensitive creature with a lightsaber. Second of all, a very common rule in the VE. All Personnel using a lightsaber must be listed within the VEDJ ranks. It takes a person vast ammounts of training to properly wield a lightsaber and only one in tune with the force can do it. Cos I think you've been warned of that already so I will not persue the matter. This compeition was set up that you guys always follow the objective, and leave the story twists up to the administrators. I have deleted every post after the introduction of the "force sensative" beings, in order to avoid controversy. "You guys have done most excellent so far and I would advise you to keep with the objective." "You may continue" Anakin said as he saluted and walked out of the training room. The squad was then placed back into the simulation. ------------------ [This message has been edited by Anakin (edited July 06, 2001).] IP: 216.160.241.21 |
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