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VEA_Sidiuos
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posted September 04, 2001 07:02 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for VEA_Sidiuos   Click Here to Email VEA_Sidiuos        Reply w/Quote
A young man approached the famous, most prestidgus meeting place of the most poewrfull force in the galaxy...the Vast Empire. The young mans' clothes were torn to shreads by what looks like the sign of a Mailoc. He struggled up the stairs to where the officers, commanders and members of the high council were gatherd. As he got closer, he could hear the faint voices of the officers. They were talking about the rebel scum, and how they must take them out in one swift swoop. Suddenly, the members of the VE, turned around in the hall to face the young man, as he collasped in front of them with a groan. One of the troopers called for a medic, as the others helped him up. They asked the man what had happend to him. Just as he was about to answer the officer, a member of the Dark Jedi order noticed a mark on the mans' arm. It was the mark of the alliances' coat of arms. It suddenly occured to the dark jedi, that the Alliance was not what it seemed. The Alliance, were forcing people into slavery...

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COL Argon Viper
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posted September 04, 2001 05:30 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for COL Argon Viper   Click Here to Email COL Argon Viper        Reply w/Quote
Argon Viper was in the dungeon helping out the investigators by freaking the living hell out of a prisoner when the mysterious man had entered the VE area.

The dungeon was right next to the Medical offices, so Viper noticed when the man was taken to the medics.

At this point, he let out a blood-curdling roar that sent even the investigators cowering, and brought the prisoner to his knees weeping out answers.

He walked out and noticed Anakin in the hallways.

"Hey Ani,"he said,"who's in the docs?"

"We don't know,"Ani replied,"but we think he used to be a slave of the Alliance."

"But the Alliance doesn't keep slaves last I checked..."

"Maybe they changed their policy,"said Anakin,"but there's an odd mark on his arm that indicates this."

"Lemme see it,"said Viper.

"Okay,"said Ani,"follow me."

They followed into the room and saw the man.

Ani talked with the medic for a second and the medic showed Argon the insignia.

Argon drew back in shock, his powerful vision also extended into the unltraviolet and infrared ranges, and what he saw was a secondary insignia in ultraviolet that was all to familiar to him...

[If this messes up your plot, tell me and I'll change it ]

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SGT MAJ Argon Viper
Fallen Angels Squad #2
"Everyone dies, it's just a matter of when, where, and how"
"History is on the move captain, those who cannot keep up will watch from a distance, and those who get in our way, will not watch at all"---Grand Admiral Thrawn
"And the horror continues..."---Talon on the Fallen Angels
"Stay out of our way or we will QUOTE you!!!!!"---Argon Viper

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VEA_Sidiuos
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posted September 06, 2001 04:20 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for VEA_Sidiuos   Click Here to Email VEA_Sidiuos        Reply w/Quote
Ok, this is a continuation from my story, from yesterday. Plz reply and tell me wot u think ...and by all mans add to it. Yeah Argon...that reply is ok...It gave me sum ideas too. Ok.here we go.


The young man was carried to med room and placed into the glowing red bacta tank that stood by the end of the bed. At that same time, an officer enterd the room, holding some fresh cloths. He placed them on the bed and then hastily exited. In the corner of the room was a 2-IB medical droid, which walked over to the tank of red liquidand removed the man from it. he droid then placed the stranger onto the bedd and checked his opps. The droid then hooked the man up to the IRV unit and allowed him to rest. Suddenly, the door of the med room wooshed open, and the four men that carried him in earler enterd the room.
"How is he doing?" asked one of the officers?" The droid turned around an replied. "Good. He should be waking up soon."
he officer nodded his head in aknowladgement. Just then, the strangers' eyes began to flutter open. A loud moan filld the room. The stranger then sat up in his bed and looked around the room. "Were...where am I ?" rasped the man.
An officer stepped forward and introduced him self. "My name is Argon. You are in the VE headquarters. What is your name?" The stranger looked at Argon with his cold, steel like eyes. "My name....is Sidious...."

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COL Argon Viper
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posted September 06, 2001 05:44 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for COL Argon Viper   Click Here to Email COL Argon Viper        Reply w/Quote
"Sidious,"repeated Argon,"why is that familiar?"

"Uhhh, Vipe,"replied Ani,"Darth Sidious was the name the Emperor used before he toppled the Old Republic."

"Oh yeah,"said Viper,"Okay, now that I figured that out, how did you get here?"

"I escaped from a large mining operation,"replied Sidious,"They had us mining Tritanium for the hulls of their starships there."

"Okay,"said Viper,"The rest of these guys recognize that symbol on your arm as that of the alliance, but I can see something in Ultraviolet, what is it?"

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SGT MAJ Argon Viper
Fallen Angels Squad #2
"Everyone dies, it's just a matter of when, where, and how"
"History is on the move captain, those who cannot keep up will watch from a distance, and those who get in our way, will not watch at all"---Grand Admiral Thrawn
"And the horror continues..."---Talon on the Fallen Angels
"Stay out of our way or we will QUOTE you!!!!!"---Argon Viper

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VEA_Sidiuos
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posted September 07, 2001 04:17 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for VEA_Sidiuos   Click Here to Email VEA_Sidiuos        Reply w/Quote
The officers spoke to Sidious for quite some time and Sidious explained the mark on his arm. "It's the alliances' mark of slavery. Those who posessed this mark were forced to work day and night in the mines. I feel that the tritainium is not for there frigates, but for somthing else. As you kno, the Alliance infiltrated the System of Sluis, and into Sulust. I'm afraid that your forces there were tottaly wiped out. I was transported to Bespin shortly after the initial attack. It was there, that I heard about the VE, and I knew then, that I wanted to join your cause and stop those rebels..."

Anakin and Viper agreed to Sidious' request and placed him into the stormtrooper academy. "As Sidious walked with Viper, he explained the ultra violet mark on his arm.
"I do not know about the ultra violet mark you see. It was not caused by the slave mark. I was born with it, and all I do know is it gives me unsurrpassed strength in battle." Viper looked at his new friend and nugged him cheerfully."We'll get the doc's to check it out later. Right now, we must start your training."Viper walked up to two men in excersice suits. Viper saluted them both and introduces Sidious."He is a new member. You are in charge of training, so give him a basic training session for now." Viper walked of to the HC meeting hall, while Sidious trained. "My name is Kaddan. I will be training you for today." Sidious shook Kaddans arm. "Geez, you have a good grip" said Kaddan, holding his hand.

As they trained, Anakin and Viper met at the HC meeting hall, where they saw Zed. "We sould take immediate action!" shouted Zed, a little too loudly.Viper and Anakin looked at Zed strangly and Zed quikly grew quiet. "I agree that we must do somthing, but we must consult the other officers." replied Anakin. "Still,"added Anakin, "I think I know the perfect squadren to send.."
Anakin had a little glint in his eye, showing that he was up to somthing. The men then turned around and walked briskly to the HC conference room, while Sidious trained hard in the Acadmey. "So" said Kaddan curiously. "Do you have any battle experiance?" Sidious looked at Kaddan with his cold, grey eyes. "Of course I do. I mean, I did have to fight my way out of the Bespin concentration camp y'know." Kaddan laughed heartily. " Of course you did! I'm not underestimating you abilities Sidious. Just train hard, and you'll go far. Oh, by the way. Here are you passwords and registration information you'll need for training." Kaddan handed Sidious an envelope and he gratfully took it. "Thank you. I will serve the VE to my fullist..."


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COL Argon Viper
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posted September 07, 2001 05:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for COL Argon Viper   Click Here to Email COL Argon Viper        Reply w/Quote
[Nice story. One problem, me and Zed aren't in the HC Not a problem for us to show up at the meetings, but just remember that we have no vote ]

During the HC meeting, Daishi and Argon had successfully lobbied to get the mission assigned to the FA squads.

Argon then went to check up on Sidious.

He found him sparring with Kadann, using the moves that are commonly taught with Imperial unarmed combat training.

As Argon entered, Kadann excused himself, he had some VEDJ stuff to take care of and had lost track of time in the fight.

"Hey,"said Sidious,"you know how to fight?"

"Sure,"said Viper,"you ready?"

"Bring it on,"replied Sidious, assuming a stance Argon recognized as belonging to an ancient Massassi fighting style, Sidious had definitely been around.

Argon assumed a Noghri stance, having studied from the Noghri just before entering service in the HOS:SO, his first fleet.

Sidious lashed out with a fist, apparently to judge Argon's reaction.

Argon, recognizing Sidious's displacement of weight, didn't even budge, letting the fist stop four inches in front of him.

Sidious, confused, lashed out with a kick.

Again, Argon refused to be lured in.

This time, more confident, he struck at Argon's solar plexus with a knife hand.

This time, Argon knew it to be a real attack, spinning to his left, catching Sidious' hand, and twisting it so that Argon possessed advantageous leverage.

"Not bad,"said Argon,"but you give way to many hints as to what you're going to do."

"Like what?"asked Sidious.

"I'll show you..."

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SGT MAJ Argon Viper
Fallen Angels Squad #2
"Everyone dies, it's just a matter of when, where, and how"
"History is on the move captain, those who cannot keep up will watch from a distance, and those who get in our way, will not watch at all"---Grand Admiral Thrawn
"And the horror continues..."---Talon on the Fallen Angels
"Stay out of our way or we will QUOTE you!!!!!"---Argon Viper

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