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TheJaper unregistered |
posted June 01, 2000 01:22 PM
As the dark jedi Japer, walks to the sith temple, he heres a strange noise. Then a jedi jumps out of the darkness with his green saber drawn. The jedi chrages the sith and Japer jumps and strikes down the jedi when he tells the sith lords about this they start a war aginst the rebels. Then as the sith wariors walk to the ship a noise is heard behind some trees... IP: 64.40.72.1 |
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Talon Citizen Posts: 584
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posted June 01, 2000 05:33 PM
 
Wow Japer, all of that action and time passed in a few sentances and only one paragraph. ------------------ IP: 64.45.136.24 |
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double_agent unregistered |
posted June 01, 2000 08:00 PM
it's not nice to criticise everyone else's work unless you can help them out. you should've at least wrote something after you ssaid that, Talon. Please don't crush the hopes of people like that. It's just not very nice. ------------------ IP: 207.32.44.16 |
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Talon Citizen Posts: 584
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posted June 01, 2000 08:40 PM
Chill dude. I was going to. I was joking anyway. Ok, you want a story, you got one. ------------------ IP: 64.45.136.11 |
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Talon Citizen Posts: 584
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posted June 01, 2000 08:50 PM
Whipping around, all of the Dark Jedi ignighted their lightsabers at once and stood in a ready stance. A scared looking looking stormtrooper appeared from the bushes. "Double_Agent, what are you doing here?" Japer asked. "Well, since Talon shut down my run on I had to join this one. Can I tag along. I'll spit shine all of your boots for you if you do." "No, Agent, it is too dangerous." "Pleeeeeeese???" "OK, fine, just stand up." said Japer. "SWEET!" Yelled Agent, running up the gangplank with the others. (OK Agent, I got you in the story, she's all yours man.) ------------------ IP: 64.45.136.11 |
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double_agent unregistered |
posted June 01, 2000 09:04 PM
hehe. "chill" talon, dude, i was just kidding too. but thanks for listening anyway. ------------------ IP: 207.32.44.17 |
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Talon Citizen Posts: 584
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posted June 01, 2000 09:23 PM
hehe, go on agent, you are in the story now. let's see it. ------------------ IP: 64.45.136.11 |
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Talon Citizen Posts: 584
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posted June 03, 2000 07:50 PM
Agent, I took the trouble to get you in this story and now the post is dead. C'mon man. Write me something. ------------------ IP: 64.45.136.11 |
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double_agent unregistered |
posted June 04, 2000 12:16 AM
umm...everyone hated agent but he saved the day and got the beautiful supermodels. THE END!!! IP: 207.32.44.14 |
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double_agent unregistered |
posted June 07, 2000 04:05 PM
how's that, talon? good, isn't it? lol. ok, maybe not supermodels, but chicks nonetheless. IP: 207.32.44.14 |
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Talon Citizen Posts: 584
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posted June 08, 2000 05:51 PM
good enough as long as you save some of them for me =c) ------------------ IP: 64.45.136.20 |
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