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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 05:50 AM
  
So there I was marching in line behind three fellow squad members and in front of six. We were on our way to the OMEGA 3, after getting word that one of our Ship Yards were under attack and we had to relieve the pressure. [This message has been edited by TJ (edited 04 February 2000).] IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 06:04 AM
All of a sudden, Master Sergeant FieryX was yelling out tons of orders. Little that I noticed we were on the ship. So I got right to my assigned job, which was closing and locking the door. Luckily I had come back to my senses before we took off or I wouldn't be telling this story right now. After two days in space our destination was in sight and we began preparing our weapons. Little did we know a Rebel Transport was waiting for us behind one of the planet's moons...TO BE CONTINUED ------------------ IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 01:02 PM
As we touched down, I could feel the ground shake from the attack. I could see transport after transport of rebels unloading. We snuck into the shipyard killing about 25 rebels. When the blaster smoke cleared I found myself all by myself, well the only other person still alive was Private Vaderchx. The strange thing was that of all the bodies on the floor there wasn't a single imperial suit, except for Master Sergent FieryX's helmet. That had proved it, they had been KIDNAPPED. We rushed back to the ship to report only to find the grass flattened where the ship had been. This didn't look good. ------------------ IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 02:42 PM
Without a ship we were stranded. We had to find cover quickly or we would not survive. After about an hour of searching, Vaderchx found a small cave we could use for shelter. We took turns looking out for an attack from the rebels. While on watch, I tried to think of a way to rescue my squad. When my watch was up I fell asleep immediately. The next morning, I woke up and found Vaderchx cooking breakfest by a fire. After eating we went back to the shipyard in search of clues that could lead us to our squad. What we found was a computer chip, after placing it in one of the many computers around the shipyard, we found that the rest of the Screaming Wookies had been taken to a rebel Capital Ship on one of the planet's moons, named Safret. After taking out a couple guards we found a Alliance CC_9600 Frigate, a couple Y-Wings and our OMEGA 3 outside the shipyard's hangar...THE TABLES HAVE TURNED. ------------------
[This message has been edited by TJ (edited 04 February 2000).] IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 02:58 PM
With two command ships in our hands thing were looking up. Since the rebels thought they had the shipyard under their control most of them returned to a base. Vaderchx and I agreed that using the Y-Wings we should clear the rest of the rebels out. It was harder than we thought but we found if we killed the rebel soldiers one by one it made the job alot easier. The tall grass surrounding the shipyard helped also. Now that we were back in control of the shipyard, we decided to fly the Frigate to the moon in account that it is a rebel ship. So there we were flying towards the rescue of our friends and the battle of our lives.. TO BE CONTINUED ============================================= ------------------ IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 03:55 PM
So there we were, on our way to the moon of Safret. Once we landed, we set up camp about 15 miles from where their ship was landed. Two days later their ship was in sight, so we were being careful not to get spotted. By noon, there was a large boulder between us and our friends. Very quietly we killed three guards stationed just outside the ships doors. Using one of the guard's access keys we entered the ship. Checking a nearby computer, Vaderchx found where our friends were being kept. Slowly sneaking through the halls, careful not to set off the alarm we found our way to their cells, while passing an office door we overheard a conversation. "Great job on taking control of that Imperial Shipyard", I heard the one man say. We soon found the cells and unlocked each door. Everyone was gld to see us, not expecting us to be the ones rescuing them. Everyone that is except Private Jambo. "I told you they would come", Jambo whispered. The shipyard controlled, our squad free, now we had to escape... ------------------ IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 04:06 PM
The escape wasn't too hard, anyone we met was on the ground within seconds. A few rebels gave chase as we left the ship but lost our trail quite quickly. When we returned to the shipyard we noticed a few imperial ships there. DJK Exar Kun and a couple other Dark Jedi were clearing out the rest of the rebels. The other imperials left in their appropriate ships, the rest of my squad members left in the OMEGA 3. Me, I went home in MY CC-9600 Frigate. THE END [This message has been edited by TJ (edited 04 February 2000).] IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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da1sh1 unregistered |
posted February 04, 2000 05:53 PM
Okay just one question. How did just two people crew a ship that has a minimum skeleton crew requirement larger than a platoon of stormtroopers? ------------------ [This message has been edited by da1sh1 (edited 04 February 2000).] IP: 63.15.111.17 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 04, 2000 07:34 PM
I forgot to mention it, but we took captives on the planet and killed them after landing. ------------------ [This message has been edited by TJ (edited 04 February 2000).] IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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Ramses Viper unregistered |
posted February 07, 2000 04:47 PM
Just a small comment. Da1sh1, who are you to question the plausibility of stories? Some of yours are a little out there too. Viper ------------------ XO/SM Ramses Viper/HCA-2/ISD Nemesis --Cool Like Ghandi-- IP: 209.144.94.10 |
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Crysus Citizen Posts: 93
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posted February 07, 2000 06:17 PM
i also have a question, in the third paragraph you have 'when the blaster smoke cleared', blasters don't discharge smoke like old brittish rifles  j/k, nice job writing a story though. ------------------ IP: 63.27.198.19 |
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Christiana Citizen Posts: 49
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posted February 10, 2000 08:44 PM
Private TJ asked me read his story. It's very nice TJ, and a very interesting plot. Keep up the good work ...and you'll get to be as good as ex-moff Raptor, Majere and Moff Kadann . . . . . . Hey, has Sess been online lately? Ambassador Tiana IP: 24.237.11.25 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted February 11, 2000 06:37 AM
Sorry, I haven't seen him lately. I just him yesterday at about 4:30 EST. Thanks for the comment. Do you have any ideas for my next story? IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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Crysus Citizen Posts: 93
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posted February 14, 2000 07:46 PM
i haven't seen him on either and he didn't call me and wish me a happy V-day i am very mad now...  ------------------ IP: 63.27.198.3 |
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Crysus Citizen Posts: 93
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posted February 14, 2000 07:54 PM
i haven't seen him on either and he didn't call me and wish me a happy V-day i am very mad now... ------------------ IP: 63.27.198.4 |
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TJ Citizen Posts: 146
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posted March 02, 2000 06:36 AM
I have been promoted to Squad Leader of the Iron Horses(Squad 1) and will be writing more stories under that name. IP: 24.112.158.22 |
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