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Auroras!
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posted March 27, 1999 12:28 PM              Reply w/Quote
Lance
Call sign/Handle: Lance
Full name: Lance Scyther
Race: Human
Class: Fighter
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Hight (in feet): 6'1

Physical Description: Brown Hair, Brown Eyes, wearing a blue long sleve shirt with a black leather vest, a black cloak of invisiblity, black long pants with black leather shoes, a blet, a money purs, hat, gloves, a golden cross neclace to keep the evil away and to always remind him that no matter what he says dose or sees that God is always with him and a ring of ice blast with his personal seal

Equipment: a medium size back pack, I wooden staff 1 inch thick and about 5 feet 4 inchs tall, a detachable axe head that can screw on the staff or be used as a small shield, also a sleeping bag and pillow, Broadsword, fishhooks, flint and steel, map, flute, 100 feet of rope, sewing needle, thread, and a few food items

Spells/Powers: blinding, animale telekinesis and "Black Bult" (only when useing the dark powers only done once little is known about this power)

Quotes: "I fear not Death but only life" "I never start a fight only finish one"

Personsaity: a nice man but dose have a dark side, fights with honor and wishes to die with it as well, he hides all his feelings and can act ruddly but all he realy wants is a friend to help others and to have a home, a hansome young man, and always willing to fight/help the right thing

Quest: to find happiness some where

Facts: here are a few facts about Mr. Scyther. He is not married, has a pets a falcon named Pidgeotto or "Pidgey" for short and a white persian tiger named Perisa. Lance is fearless, swift, intelligent, and a great fighter!

Back Ground:
Lance was born in the land of Raithal in Ralltir the capitol city. He has a twin brother by the name of Neal Scyther, Lance the older twin had the right (being of noble birth) to be Lord of Raithal! Neal of course being jealous, saught to kill or take Lance's place. Lance was happy with what he had and thought nothing of some day ruling the great land. But Neal dreamed of the power and wealth it would bring him. But, to do so he need help from the clan of Morgan. With their help Neal killed his father and Lance was set up for the murder! Before their father died Lance was at his side. His father gave him the ring of ice blast with the family's royal seal shortly before he died and the guards took Lance away. Now that Neal was in high command he banished him from the land so that he may never return! Unknowing to Neal that Lance had the seal, Lance walked out to the woods with tears in his eyes. To know that he had been banished and had to cross through the forest of Lapras wich might have been a death sentence to a young boy who knew nothing of the woods!Things in Raithal were not looking good either for with out the seal Neal had virtually no power so the Morgan's grew tired of this and took over Raithal. It is asumed Neal was killed but still unknown.

Back in the forest, young Lance walked through maybe what you could call "the shadow of death" it grew dark and Lance had to spend his frist night in the forest alone and frightened. Morning came, Lance arose and ran through the path as fast as he could. When the path ended he saw a small town. Amazeingly Lance had survived and it seemed could start a new life. Unforturnatly for Lance, this was not the case. In this town he found a girl named Mina. She has blond hair, blue eyes and is the same as Lance. She tells him that this is the town of Ourorus and visitor are not welcome because of the fear of "evil travelers" or "black magic". So Lance has no place to stay. Mina shows him a nearby cave. She would sneak food out for him. At frist it was very hard for Lance but then day after day, night after night it seemed a way of life. There he learned to hunt and how to serve the hard times but still growing in his heart was a hatred and wrath for his brother. But it seems that meeting and speaking with Mina every day has calmed him down. 3 years have past since the terrible day of his banishment. As he tries to hide it and the evil which burns within him he has learned much and has come a long way. His once fear is now fearlessness and on this speacial day he will find the meaning of courage!

On this day a small circus has came to a nearby village. Lance and Mina rushed to see all the wonders and sights of the world that they have never seen or maybe never will. They saw many strange animales and creatures but what caught Lance's eyes was the white Persian tiger. His eyes locked with hers almost like magic but he became angered to see the people and trainers misstreat it! They would throw things call it names and just all out mistreat her. He could tell that she was weak and sick from all the abuse in her short life. It bugged Lance all the way to Mina's home and that night he went back. He watched her for hours. He saw her pain and could almost feel it! That's when he made his first bold dicision to free the tiger! He grabhed his dagger and jabbed it in the slit and wiggled and twisted it until it unlocked. He swung open the door and stepped back ectpecting the tiger to run out withinthe blink of an eye. Lance knew some thing was wrong. He carried the gentle tiger, about 1 year old, to the forest where he kept her warm, feed her herbs and other things to make her grow healthy and strong. Mina of course, thought Lance was crazy because the tiger could turn on him or anyone at any moment. Lance didn't care, he wanted to make sure she was alright before he let her go.

Lance came to be very close to the tiger and named her Persia. After Lance was sure the circus was gone, Lance and Persia started walking around more and it was almost like Lance could read the mind of Perisa. The day had come for Lance to let Persia go. With a sadness in his heart he led her deep into the woods and walked away, but while his back was turned, Perisa jumped on his back making Lance fall. "Persia! you need to go you're free!", Lance said unsure of what he wanted to do. Persia rolled over Lance so that Lance was on his back and growled in his face. "Ok I'll take that as a no!" said Lance as Persia licked his face. "Ok, ok girl get off lets go home!" Lance said in a much better mood. Mina was the frist to feel that Lance had a special gift with animals and then falling in love with Persia and Lance.
Mina and Lance were getting close. It seemed all their life they had been together and gorwn up together. Lance wanted to marry Mina but the law states you must be 21 and so he would wait 3 more years for his dream to come true. Three more years would pass and nearing Lance's 21st birthday, once again a dark cloud fell over his life. Mina being a blond hair blue eyed virgin is very rare and the last thing on the list for a spell on IMMORTALITY! For the dark sorcerer by the name of Daypromo this looked like the last piece of the puzzles if he were to sacrafice her to the god of life her blood would finish his evil spell and and make him invulnerable! As Lance and Mina were walking through the forset as they did every day a black dragon came down like a fallen angel to earth and pushed Lance down and cairred Mina to a dark tower. Today Lance would learn honor!

Taking his staff in one hand and his flute in the other he calls for the sleeping Persia! Lance got on the back of Persia and they rode to the tower. Lance broke down the tower door with help from Persia and ran up the stairs where he saw the dark sorcerer. Then as suddenly as Lance saw him he was gone! He could hear his evil laugh as Lance used flash to see where he was hidding. There was no sign of him how strange... he then took Mina who was tied down and cairred her in his arms and stormed down the stairs again. Once they reached the end of the stairs they heard the laugh again but still no sight of him. The out of no where the sorcerer reappeared and said "Boy, I need her for she is my key to IMMORTALITY!". Lance wasting no time rushed up to him and did a running kick to knock him down "NO! you will never have her as long as I have the breath to give me life!" "Very well" said Daypromo as he transformed into the Black Dragon. It was clear Lance had no chance in this fight but still he stood in fearlessness waiting for whatever may happen.

The dragon swated at Lance with his might paw that nearly misses Lance. Lance not giving an inch ran toward the dreaded monster and was slapped to on side. Lance did not give up! Lance managed to jump on the back of Daypromo grabing his ears and pulling back as hard as he could. Daypromo got on his hind legs well quickly to his stomach to throw Lance off and it did befoe Lance could get up. The dragon grabbed him and squezzed him then Lance was thrown aganist a tree with a hard thud. Lance did not move nor did Persia because of a paralyzing grip spell of Daypromo. Daypromo picked up Mina and turned to take her back as Lance heard her scream there was nothing he could do. But some how Lance rose to his feet with blood running down his face and his arms hanging down to his side. A rush of rage flowed through him as he felt a power like he had never felt before. He began to glow and evil blue haze around him and then turned to black as the sky darkened. Lance raised his hands over his head in one swift move as he yelled at the top of his lungs then made a circle where now his arms are out in front of him as far as he could. Grasping his hands togerher, hemade a small black ball then brought his hands closer to his chest. The ball gets bigger and bigger. The Dragon turns around to drop the girl just in time to watch Lance release this awsome power hitting the dragon turning the sky a blinding white and ripping the flesh off Paypromo. As the great sorcerer tried, to fight it off all he could do is turn his head as the grim reaper welcomed him to hell! Lance watched his bones turn to ash because of the awsome blast! All that was left was a black cloak of invisiblity wich is how the sorcerer was able vanish. Lance passed out from the drain this might power had down. When he awoke he was to see the elders... little did he know that he did the Black Death force ball. It is said it is sent from the very depth of hell!

After all he had done how far he came one week before his 21st birthday, Lance was banished again for what he had done. Mina was heart broken as was Lance. They kissed for the frist time and most likely the last time as he pulled out a ring whitch he had kept around his neck and put it on her finger. "I love you! and I will be back for you! and we will get married you have my word of honor!", Lance said with tears in his eyes then Mina said "I love you too here take this and keep it close to your heart because you will always be in mine!" It was a small golden cross and Lance did keep it close to his heart always. Another year had past and messanger pigeon letters can't take the place of her gentle voice. But in that year he found a baby falcon and she has grown up alot in 4 years for Lance is 25 today and is finally in store for some good news!

Pidgeotto
Call sign/Handle: Pidgey
Full name: Pidgeotto
Race: bird
Class: flacon
Gender: female
Age: 4
Hight (in feet): 1'4
Physical Description: brown, with black talons
Personsaity: a kind and beautiful bird but only loves and obeys Lance
Facts: was saved and raised by Lance as a baby


Persia
Call sign/Handle: Persia
Full name: Persia
Race: cat
Class: tiger
Gender: female
Age: 10
Hight (in feet): 4'1 high 6'2 feet long
Physical Description: white, with black strips
Personsaity: a beautiful animal to say the lest strong mighty and fast to aid Lance along
Facts: was saved by Lance from the circuse

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-Auroras!

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