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Crysus
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posted October 11, 2000 10:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Crysus   Click Here to Email Crysus        Reply w/Quote
Everyone,

Make sure to keep yourselves up-to-date with everything going on in the VE. A lot of the time there are many different things going on, and while this serves to keep everyone active it also causes confusion. So if you are confused, ask someone! There are many things that you can be doing right now.

The Stormtrooper Corps site has been on my mind, and I think it is more than past due that something is done about it. If I can't get Rizzy to figure a way to get it done and updated easily then we will just have to get something else done. I image we will still have a cool flash intro, but then a regular site... kindof like the best of both worlds!

Please remember to get your reports in. If you send them up the chain of command it would be appreciated. So send your reports to your immediate officer (Squad Leader, Platoon Commander, etc.) This is just one way to show that you are active and that you are capable of leading. The army is always looking for leaders.


*1000 IC's to the person that finds the biggest grammatical error in my post.


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[This message has been edited by Crysus (edited October 11, 2000).]

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Anakin
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posted October 12, 2000 12:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Anakin   Click Here to Email Anakin        Reply w/Quote
hmmm 1000 ic's

well kindof is supposed to be kind of. That's big I guess.

oh and there is three periods ... right in the middle of a sentence

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Fury
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posted October 12, 2000 11:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Fury   Click Here to Email Fury        Reply w/Quote
How about this?

"If I can't get Rizzy to figure a way to get it done and updated easily(,) then we will just have to get something else done. I image we will still have a cool flash intro, but then a regular site... kind (sp) of like the best of both worlds!"

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Talon
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posted October 12, 2000 12:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Talon   Click Here to Email Talon        Reply w/Quote
"So if you are confused, ask someone!" I think that can be explained a little better =c)

"If I can't get Rizzy to figure a way to get it done and updated easily(,) then we will just have to get something else done." I added a "," and I think that "get something else done" whould sound better as 'do something else.'

"kindof like the best of both worlds!"
"Kindof" should be kind of (and if you are going to for a better sound, you might want to word it differently. =c)

"If you send them up the chain of command(,) it would be appreciated." I added a comma.


That's about all I can find without my spell checker.


Tally-ho

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TJ
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posted October 12, 2000 08:56 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for TJ   Click Here to Email TJ        Reply w/Quote
No-one noticed..."I image we will still have a cool flash intro" should be "I imagine..."

"a cool flash intro, but then a regular site as well...kind of like the best of both worlds!"

Oh, oh...the title says "Keep yourselfs up-to-date" rather than yourselves in the actual post.

Those are all I found that no-one's mentioned. Some might not really be considered "grammatical" mistakes.

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Crysus
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posted October 14, 2000 12:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Crysus   Click Here to Email Crysus        Reply w/Quote
TJ got it.

Right on the title itself!

Way to go TJ... I heard the bank was down, but I will check it here in a bit and add your money if I can. Nice job.

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